Comments : My Heart Has Two Left Feet - Triolet

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Its cute :)) love it :)) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I'm not a huge fan of triolets, but I really liked this one. Enough to think that I should try it.
    Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    You still amaze me with your formed poems. This was really cute.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Such sweet tender piece of poetry, loved it .

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Oh I love that line that your heart has two left feet! That was soooo cute! This was adorable Gem....like a love nursery rhyme. Just so sweet!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by bc

    My Heart Has Two Left Feet Eh...Most Interesting And Yet Very Random!! Funny And Cute Too. Once Again, I'd Give It A 5/5, (Like I Always Do, LOL), well just wanted to answer your comment and say thanks for it, well no, i'm not in a poetry group let alone in a club on this site...why you may be thinking!? well the truth is I really don't know =S, I haven't really thought about it =\

    Bernadette Contreras =)

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Awww. that was so sweet aw. omg. haha. i know this feelinggg! haha. cute poem baby<33

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is so sweet...was just imagining a heart with two left feets running..lolol this is so cute indeed...loved ur imagination....beuatifully written

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey hun havent been on the site in ages glad to see uve posted so many poems. just catching up now, great job with this one. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww. nice structure flow rhythm and so on. this poem was cute. i loved the line "my heart has two left feet" thats awesome.

    5/5. and congratz on winning my contest.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rammaneekun

    My heart is like that, too! lol!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very cute. Excellent job on this form Gem!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Really terrific......catchy, too....;-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gentry

    Aww... that's cute! Very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Stitch

    You really thought that out. It was good though I liked it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mariselly

    That was very cute!

  • 16 years ago

    by Caro

    Its really cute ...llol.. i like it :P

    (*caro*)

  • 16 years ago

    by Koo

    I like it ^_^ i like the style and i think its really cute and it made me smile =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awwwwwwww its soo sweet! I loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    I really like this poem........
    Good job
    ~KISSES~