Silly but good...

melissa

Chocolate....my absolute favorite! Well written acrostic....really like it! The rhyming is good and words convey the essence of chocolate....

Something silly but mighty funny, lmao
You do know that you've made me want chocolate now and i'm that mad about it, i keep a secret stash in my room, lmao
Well done on this, very cute!
5/5
*gem*

Ahahahahahaha, this made me giggle.
I loved this, it was refreshing and unique and made for a nice read.

Lol, cute poem : P

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This was cute. Extra kudos to you for making this form rhyme. Good job!!!

I really love acrostic poems! I believe you pulled this one off nicely. Choc! Yum. I liked this. It was silly but entertaining and cute all at the same time. A nice flow and a good rhyme. Well done. 5/5
~Mel