I'M WISE

by GraCiE   Mar 21, 2007


You say "I'm sorry, I'm busy."
"I'll call you later, I swear."
But later never arrives,
Cos to be honest you dont really care.

You say "I love you, my darling."
But you always forget the kiss,
cos you know you can tell true feelings from that,
So it's the part you always miss.

You say "I miss you, I want you."
But your thirst is easy to quench.
I can guarantee you sniffing around,
and ******* some other wench.

You say "You're the only one for me."
"You make my strong heart pound."
But God knows how many times you've spun that same **** round and round.

You say "our love is strong"
But really your describing your lies,
You see... I'm not a stupid girl,
I can see right through you...I'M WISE.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Very well done on this! I loved it. It was very powerful and it flowed very well. I especially loved the ending, it went very well with the rest of the poem. This deserves an 8 but since it only goes to 5 lol I'll vote a 5! Well done on this. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Wow, powerful poem, yet strong pain and hurt love came through...beautiful in so many ways, with a bit of edge .....great flow

    ----tara

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    This was a great message. I hope that if it were a true situation that you would be wise enough to let go. I have been in that situation many times and held on being naieve to what was going on. I knew but wouldn't let myself believe it. Great Job on this.
    Dixie