I am so sorry for your pain
great poem =] 5/5

Wow.. ours are alot alike.. this is really good. <3 i feel the same.
-X-amanda-X-

I so totally love this poem

That's so beautiful, and so sad, I'm crying now, I guess partly because I was on the other side of that poem (except that it didn't quite work out so obviously I'm still here) not so long ago, I never realised how deeply things like that affect everyone around you, I feel so guilty that I even tried now. That was such a strong and beautifully sad poem, and really well written. Keep writing!
Helen

Your glad your best friend is dead??? wow...i hope there is no after life because if she read that i bet it would upset her greatly. you can't just blame her for her own suicide, happy people dont kill themselves, maybe she knew you better than you think, knew if she had said good bye then she wouldn't have gone through with it as you would have stopped her, she obviously cared about you, i just think its wrong that you now hate her; i'm sorry if my comment offends you but its my opinion

Heya omg dat poem was brill omg it made me cry.im so sori bou ur m8 killn herself.omg r u ok nw?xxxxxxxxxxxxx

I'm sorry you lost your friend, I really loved the poem though. I think it really reflects your feelings.

Dude ur really talented i felt everything u said...i almost started cryin...simple one word touchin

Oh my god.
this poem almost made me cry.

nicely written. i love this.
xxx.

Wow. What something to deal with. Must have been terrible.

This was very deep, your very in touch with your feelings and you can express yourself so well. Sorry about what happened to your friend but your life is very valuable and you have to keep going.

This is such an amazing poem, its so powerful!
Keep up the great work!
:)

OMG
i loved this
and i can relate in a way
i too lost someone dear
we had a pact
n she just left me all alone
so i thankyou for writing wat i cant
x

Wow .. this is the second time i read yoor poem, its wow good .. sad but good .. (Y) .. xxx

Wow. This one hit me for six. First time a poems been responsible for making me cry in like forever. Don't really know what to say. i'm a bit shattered that you have so much hate towards her. I understand but still a bit sad. Kept reading because i thought you were going to forgive her or at least miss her. I dont think she did it to personally offend you. i'd hate to think my friends will think that of me when im gone. But very good poem very emotional. very hurtful and powerful.

WOW IS VERY GOOD KEEP THE GOOD WORK

WOW... This was just so deep... I know that this is one of the things that NO ONE would want to happen.... It's the worst thing that could happen to a friend... in a way I'm glad i read this... this could have been MY best friend's response to my suicide note... well, i guess i'm okay now...... Hope that you continue healing

Wow. thats deep... im really sorry that goes on. its tragic when people are allowed to be on that level of unhappiness

There is so much hate and lonliness in this work of art. Having gone through that situation, I can perfectly identify myself with your poem. Sometimes I still hate myself for hating him.
Great work, if so much pain can be great

Oh. Thats very sad. I've never had a friend die. I like the poem.