Wicked. def add that poem to my favs list and u 2 my fav ppls too
cant wait to read more
WOW is all I can say
xx

Wow, thats an amazing poem. my sister is suicidal, and if she ever left me, i think id feel the same way. im so sorry she left you... but, good job. ur an awesome poet.

5/5 sorry to hear about your loss, well done on pouring your heart out and turning it into such a great emotional poem, i've never known a poem to make tears come out of my eye now i do, hope writing this has helped you deal with death. *hugs*

That was amazing. The way you are able to understand what you are feeling, and write it down like this is amazing. I'm so glad you have written something like this, because it shows people who are thinking about suicide the consequences of it. You have got to be one of the most talented writters I have ever seen. You certainly have a fan out of me! Amazing job. And thank you for sharing something so personal with all of us.

Woow..AMAZING
LOVED IT!!!
you're a really great writer man ^.^
& it's really really sad...
Another wow, look how many ppl commented!! wow that's really gr8
i only have ur comments :(
well,i just did my profile 2day..
but really that's some gr8 work hun :)

Ohh & btw..thanks for all ur comments..
i really really appreciate it alot bbz :)

Firstly, this is crazy intense.
I liked that it didnt always rhyme,
because it made your words that much deeper.
Suicide is such a sad subject, for me at least;
i've been in that position more than once.
I'm always up for talking,
as I might be able to relate in some way,
if you are ever in the need to vent to a stranger.
Love the creativity.

Megx3333

OMG...this poem is so touching-the words you use are so powerful. i dont think ive come accross a reply to a suicide note before but you have written it extremely well. im sorry that your friend left and that you now go through the pain she once did.

im here if you want to talk, i dont know how you feel but i know how it feels losing someone and having mixed emotions about them for a long time after. i can relate to your pain, in more ways than one.

be safe angel

amanda x

Wow this poem is very good, very emotional. I really like the ending. Surprising yet expected.
5/5 :)

This one cut me deep. Its really really good. Just makes me glad I got to my friend in time everytime she tried to end it

I'm sorry gor yur loss!
very powerful!
great bought ears to my eyes!
keep up ur good work!
if you ever need a chat i'll always be here!
xo

Wow. That one gave me goosebumps. I'm sorry you had to go through this.

...wow so sad, again, this was great, you are SO very talented!
this is goin on my faves!

Im glad you expressed this, sometimes when i think my depression is bad, i need a wake up call.

Wow, and you say i write well? thats powerful and sent shivers up my spine, well done your a talent x P

You made me tear up. wow ur good. if u ever need to talk i have helped ppl b4 so feel free to wright me.

<3 alwalys,
emily

WOW KiiD THAT POEM WAS CRAZY!!
ii LOVED iiT!!! AWSUM AWSUM JOB!!!
HAHA WOW THATS ALL ii CAN SAY.
SPEECHLESS!!! KEEP UP THE AMAZiiNG WORK!!! 5/5

Very much intense feelings, !!!!!

i can feel your painthrough the words , very nice done

5/5

This very good and very deep i love it

You're Poems Are So Awesome! Keep Those Fingers Typing, And Sorry For The Loss. xx