Comments : The Child with the Gun

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The flow was great. the energy was great. to me it was a cross between children of war and the holocaust. great change of subject. i see you took my advice. this was great!

    i wrote three new acrostics during ol, please check them out. rrc them pllleeazzz memo

    5/5. AGAIN!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Haha, i shall comment once more. haha you need to work on fluffying your comments. haha. and you need to add more poems here, cuz i have commetned them all..i think.

    anddddd can you read my acrostics. they feel naked.