Like a bullet hitting my chest. Intense.

Man i can feel you on this poem too. it sucks but this poem is intense and yet gr8. hope that you are feeling better.....5/5

This poem is intense. Gets your attention and keeps it. Your a great poet. If i rated people i would give you a five. Nessa

Another very nice one!
god bless 5/5

Wonderful poem, so much emotion! and i agree, it was very INTENSE.

great job 5/5!

Really pretty poem loveit 5/5 great job

Deep

Alright, really cheesy here, but basically: awwww lol tht was really deep, gud job, the endin is perfect, really emotional,

nice

NICE JOB....IT GOOD WHEN A PERSON CAN ACTUALLY ADMIT WHEN THEY ARE WRONG.