Mixed emotions in this one :) its always hard to hear your parter talking about their x or worse their friends saying things just to spite you :( but its what makes this world so amazing is its imperfections :)) another fantastic poem gem 5/5 as always :))

Well i could imagine the feelings u must be having and its really terrible for sure. Nothing in life is perfect and past is always there to haunt...but to stay happy u always have to overcome past..wishing u all the best

take care

I know exactly how you must have been feeling and let me tell you that I have it worse. At least you can try to put that in the past and you know that your living with true love each day with a future you can talk about.
You'll create many happy memories and we'll look forward to you writing about them.

A heartfelt poem, clearly reflects your emotions.
Love relationships always get complex when some ex pops up in life, inspite of all love and assurances one can never get over with the feeling of insecurity or uncertaintity.Im glad it was from your past and not present.
Wish you both all the happiness and peace in martial life.

Best wishes.
chavii.

Good job on this poem. All that past stuff comes sometimes and rears it's ugly head.

As long as she is oin our lives
I'm never going to rest
I'm always going to wonder if
I'm the girl who's second best

Just remember you are number 1.
Take Care Love Cindy

A great concluding stanza. It was my fav. Thanks for the suggestion on my poem....and lol...I did write it to be a song. heehee.
Charisma*

Yet Again It's A Mixed Feeling For Me...It Makes Me Think About Stuff I've Never Imagine Myself Thinking About..Now If I Start Saying What I'm Thinking About, Then You'd Be Reading A Half Page Comment, So To Just Finish Off I Just Want To Say What I Forgot To Say When I Said You Were My Poetry Idol And All, Well It's Not Really Big, All Is That All You're Poems Have A Feeling In It To Make You Think, Feel, Cry, Laugh And Smile Inside..Well Basically Thats It..5/5 On This Poem =)

Bernadette.C.

While You Read My First Comment, I So Forgot The Whole Potry Group You Asked Me If I Wanted To Join..Well I Thought About It And Umm..I Decided Why Not?? It's Poetry, I Love It, Why Wouldn't I Want To Join In , So Yeah, There My Answer To Your Question If I Wanted To Join =)

This poem was great, alot of emotion to it and the flow was spot on. I'm in a similar situation to this at the moment only a little different but i can definately relate.
Another great write from you gem :)
5/5

Nice ans sweet;
i understand how you all feel. or used to..

That was a very good poem it explains exactly what is happenin to m,e at the moment i hope u and your fiance got through it and i hope me and my boyfriend will to thanks for that poem it has made me think about telling him how i feel thank you!
love lucie x x x

This poem was blunt and needed more colorfull descriptive words and more subtle refrences.

You did an awesome job 5/5

I changed my mind after reading your poem again. I think its very good, and i can defanitely relate to your situation. Sorry for my previous comment.

Well done anyway. you should all be proud that you made up such a wonderful, yet sad poem. so much emotion in it.

5/5 david

This poem is so sad. but i loved it anyway. great job!

Awww Gem this is really sad I can toally relate to it...I haven't commented one fo your poems in awhile but now I know that your writing is still amazing I loved this poem and everything about it!

Jeebus! I loved this poem so much, it gave me the chills. =/ I know exactly how it feels to feel like you're the second best. This poem was just amazing. I hope you're still not feeling this way, though. It's not a pleasant feeling. Anyways, hun, keep writing! Take care. 5/5

` Liz

Aw. Gem.
please tell me you dont still feel this way. =[
great job & feel better.

Another well done write that many people can relate to. People say things sometimes to get a reaction and when they see they can't bother you, they're nound to be quiet or change the subject. You can think of it like Marcus having the best last! Good luck!