Well this has to be one of the best poems I have ever read!!!
Ahahahah, seriously, I think we did a great job with this and it was fun!

Yes i can agree that love is amazing. it makes you feel so good. like you own the world, and no one can tear you down. well done!

5/5 David

This was beautiful. it shows true compassion and I absolutely loved it. the detail was amazing, keep it up

heidi may

Two of my fave poets =)
I love collabs and when they are as good as this one, i love them all the more =)
Such emotion.. you two work really well together.
I hope to see more like this soon =)
5/5
*Gem*

Hey this was really good i havent read many poems off this site in ages and that one was great to start the day off =p very well written to the both of u. great use of words. keep it up xx

The two of you did an amazing job on this poem. Really beautiful!

This moment we'll always treasure
And fate will guide us through
Just know in your heart
I'm forever devoted to you.

Loved this stanza. I love the forever kind of love. Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Great job on this you both did a really good job.

Such beautiful love poem , great job both of you.A very enjoyable read.

Excellent poem.. :) You know me I am all about the love poems.. this one was very good, umm ummm makes you want to go on a cruise! God! Let me clear my thoughts! ~LOL~
thank you darlin,
tom

I loved this poem. I have also did a collab with Jenni. She's a beautiful writer to do a collab with. This expressed so much within it. You two honestly worked so well together to create an awsome poem. 5/5 from me definitly. Well deserving. ~Mel