:( tears to my eyes, well done its very good xxxxxxxxxxx

This is so sad. I don't know what else to say. I will keep you in my prayers.

A day when you would say you love me.
A day when I could be free.

Hope you see this day soon.
Take care Cindy

A day when I'm not living in fear.

perfect ending to tie it all up.
it's different than your other work i've read. but it's also very good. the point stick out :D

Good poem once again i think tht it should b more longer and with a better ending..just my oppion its good as it is already..i like the first lines though it got me drawed into the poem..

Oh god, this poem was so sad yet it was written perfectly.......
this made me cry as how emoionaly yourspeaking in ur words
great job done