Comments : After You Said Yes

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Hmm, Ok well I liked the poem, don't take me wrong. I get the thought and what you were trying to get at and its a really meaningful point. I can connect to it. Except for I'm sort of confused, you see usually when you say yes, that means Yes..I love you? Or yes...what? That's why I'm sort of confused. I think it kinda doesn't connect with the first part. Apart from that the rhymes and the topic is all beautiful.
    It's just that you've got potential and well your other poems are like out of the world. So I must admit, I like the others a little more. But like I said every poem tells a different story. Never the less, It was good.
    Ash

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this, I thought it was filled with emotion and depth behind the words.
    I think the flow would be a little better if you eliminated fillers, but apart from that, it was a great write, as always.

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    I really loved this poem...you're an excellent writer...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessy

    Thats good

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken

    It was really good.
    I swear. I almost cried
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    This is really good. I really liked this. The rhyming was good, and its sweet yet sad.
    good job
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love the poem and the meaning behind it, we're all forced to make choices in life and sometimes it's hard. I think if you used some punctuation in key points in your poems that they would appear much better. Just write your words as you would say them, if your gunna have a little pause in between words then toss a comma in. The poem was still great and very few things need to be changed. excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Memories, oh memories. Loll.
    It brought back many.
    Anyway.

    This was a great poem, easily related to.
    Great emotion, perfect flow.
    I loved it, once again: Great, great, great poem!

    Keep it up, sweetheart.
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Great poem i really liked it.. It had good flow and rhymed really well. its also very easy to relate to.. it had one mistake that i seen and it was not that big of a deal either.
    "I know that this hurts
    You just as bad as me"
    where it says "you" its supposed to be "Your" i think it is anyway.. lol 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ambar

    Great poem, know the feeling- can totally relate 5/5