It was cute but there really was no depth--something hard to do with an acrostic poem but that can be done. You want something that stands in the readers minds. Reread yours and see if it does that. Does it stand in your own mind? Or does it slip by unnoticed?

I liked this very original!!

Ooo!! i like this poem its very simplistic and very cute =) short words but says lots..a 5/5