I like it. Nice vocabulary. Good words to describe everything. Keep writing!

Excellent structure.
The words were spot on and the ending was great =)
5/5
*Gem*

The words!!! Oh my gosh! You are now my dictionary!! those words were descriptive and great! I loved this poem! nice job!

I liked it, but I was a bit confused with the ending stanza, the bsbi c ... what are those supposed to stand for? Anyways, on an emotional side, I give this a 5/5 .. (:

Amazing use of vocabulary, it's just brilliant...
no much other words for it except : EXCELLENT JOB !! keep writing !

5/5

Well its different from what i usually see in acrostic poems, but i like to see people mix the styles and you did excellent, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I liked this "hybrid" poem. i think the use of two styles added a sense of confusion which can be either good or bad. the words you used were clever and this poem flowed well, it was sweet and beautiful.

Wow i loved it. it all went together. And just as this poem. It was intense