Lost love is absolutely horrible really!
my favorite part was
"The next verse was the collapse of his relationship
Where things were going wrong and he let them slip"
im sorry really, tis such an aweful thing :(
5/5 though love.

Wow this poem was amazing it was very well written and had great rhythem, you had a very great story and you wrote it quite well, very good job keep it up

Wow!!! Amazing! Just absolutly amazing! I'm adding this to my contst vote! Your work is just wow! It blows me away whenever I read something new!

Hey,
Well first of all, your title caught my attention. Blood insted of ink? It made me think what on earth is this poem about. Well anyways considering this poem has 49 comments before mine im sure whatever im going to say has been said before me. I like the rhyme scheme you have going on in this poem, none of the rhymes seem forced. I like how youve got this idea going on about a poem written in blood. That by itself creates this idea of how dark the poem is. The last stanza of the poem was my favourite;

"Finally he wrote the last verse with utmost perfection
His poem had taken a twist but he liked the direction
It paralleled his emotions and also made him think
Next time he writes he will use blood instead of ink "

That stanza just seems even more darker then the others before it. You can feel the twist the poem has taken. The emotions you can feel, along with this dark thought he has going on. The the "Blood instead of ink" extends how dark the poem feels. I really enjoyed this one. Keep writing! xx

Beautiful, i love you, marry me 0.0

How emo.. lol jk.. i never enjoy poems poems about blood and stuffs but this poem was really wonderful.. i love how you went through the stages of and leading up to boys breakdown.. again the flow was perfect.. and the descriptions were clear.. another great poem .. keep it up :D

Wow, nice write. I loved your word choice and the ryhme in this poem. The flow as well as the structure was good, Keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Wow, truly amazing.

Bravo. This poem is a work of art, I must say. I noticed how easy it was to read, which is wonderful. Also, the rhyming seemed so natural, as if you weren't even trying.

I love how you wrote a poem about writing a poem. Very original. And how you went through all the stages and all of these feelings.

Like I said. Bravo.

This poem literately makes me speechless ... it's just so amazing, and I can't help but read it over and over again, AMAZING job on this, probably my favorite of all your poems I've read so far 5/5 <--wish I could give you more.

Just amazing !!

WOW!! that was amazing! it made an image in my head...i loved it! 5/5 for sure!