If only we had these powers. This was a very beautiful poem. Such strong desires we have when we fall deeply in love.

Great poem.

OMG! THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!

That was a beautiful, loving poem. However, I felt that it was just too simple. Your vocab usage was rather limited, and I feel you could have expressed your emotions in more depth.

It was still a pleasure to read, though. It's always good to read a nice love poem. :) 5/5.

Ur poems are amazing. they blow me away. you have such a beautiful way of expressing ur emotions. i am adding you to my favourites!! xx

Ur poems are amazing. they blow me away. you have such a beautiful way of expressing ur emotions. i am adding you to my favourites!! xx

Pretty good. But it was a "basic" love poem and I'm usually pretty picky about love and sad poems. Try adding some similies and metaphors.