Comments : Im not sure.. suggestions welcome

  • 17 years ago

    by Carisa

    Gosh...

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    That was really dark. The poem seemed like it was filled with a lot of pain and anger.

  • Let This Poem Scream Of The Hate And Anger That I Hold Inside..
    I Cry With Blood Of Others..
    I Hate You All, You All Think You Know The Real Me. But You KNOW NOTHING

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW that was intense, i love the build in this and how fomr the very virst word to he last, ech word is picked so carefully...amazing job

    melissa

  • What in the hell are you talking about.. @@@@ me..