Well done on this poem. it is all correct. no errors (that i found). well done. the ending was the part i loved most!

well done and keep writing, 5/5 David

Rachel
What a beautiful picture you have created with your words.

Thankful for my sight and sound,
and that my feet can walk this ground.
For granted many things are taken,
Realized when gone, what we've forsaken.

How true this stanza is.
Love Cindy

Beautiful poem of Spring and thanks! We should all take a moment to count our blessings....life is so short!

Rachel
This is a great poem. I use to take so many thigs for granted till I lost my Dad and my Mom became ill. Things like this I would give anything for her to feel again.

Thankful for my sight and sound,
and that my feet can walk this ground.
For granted many things are taken,
Realized when gone, what we've forsaken.

Great poem!

Another great poem and how true it is. We take many things for granted.
Great poem with great imagery.

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Such a serene feeling to be in touch with nature and appreciative of the surroundings. You have penned it perfectly in this write. Marvelous Job
Dixie

Great

Mmmm 5

Lovely and unusual.........both relaxing and thought-provoking....

You have a wonderful talent on description! You painted a beautiful image in my mind. Your vocabulary is soooo strong! I need to work on mine. Your rhyming was perfect nothing seemed forced at all. Beautiful work. I really liked this part:

-I'm very glad you have taken a liking to my poetry.. lol .. i was surprized at first when someone commented them... i usually have to ask. By the way.. the poems about pain and cutting themselves.. i just write them expressing emotions others feel, i personally don't cut myself :) If you want a little ... wait don't want to give it away. Read Do I Know You? .. of course I always return the favor ;)

LOL sorry bout that.. the cat stepped on the keyboard.. and happened to step directly on the enter key... lol my favorite part was that last stanza... wonderful work!

5.5

This poem has deffintaly done me in. lol you've made it to my favorites. i love how you expressed nature in this poem. well done.

It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.

Rachel,I truly enjoyed this poem,We sometimes lose sight of the beauty around us,It flowed smoothly and was beautifully written.