Well done on your first poem. well done and plz keep writting!

5/5 David

The beginning of the poem drew me in and then the end made me kinda chuckle. I liked it! =] Keep it up!

Ciao

Haha. I liked that poem. Nice job. Keep writing. I would like to hear more from you. 5/5.

ps. work more on the structure. it was fine, but can be improved upon.

Hehe I liked this one it was cute! The first stanza was amazing it was very descriptive and I could picture it all which is good. The last stanza made me crack a smile because it's so true!! hahaha nice poem overall can't wait to read more