I loved it! The rhyming is great, the idea is great, and the flow is great!

Loved it!

Great job. 5/5
Keep it up!

Nice poem , well penned.

Good job Rate. I liked it. It flowed nicely. Good words too. I didnt get beat over the head with the point. Which is nice. 5/5

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

Exelent!!!
its so sweet!