Oh well done. i love this poem. so much love involved.

5/5 always. David

I loved the words you used. well done. the poem was magic and the description was perfect. i was amazed by how you wrote.

5/5 David

A great poem!! deep, meaningful, and powerful... i can relate to it. =)
5/5 Ada**

Nice work yazdan...i worte some more finially...man you and i need to talk more hit me up