This is a good poem.
I use my last bit of energy to scream.
I scream till my lungs bleed.
But again no one comes.

i relate to that bit and thuink you have wroite it with good power in it. well done and take kare xxx

Wow, full of emotion and so twisted, i loved the idea of it being self torture, it was so original, so weird :D great poem, keep them coming please!!!

This is in my opinion your best poem. thanx