Just being picky and me, there is a typo in 'unknowen'--UNKNOWN.

anyway. I like the similie of the butterfly in a cage. That just gave the poem more depth. The length of the poem could be a tad longer, but it's find the way it is. This girl you write of, I love her mysteriousness.

=] {i'm not gunna rate because i cant give you neither a 5 nor 4, so your in between} <3 take care.

I like this one. i can feel something coming out of it. i think its because i can relate to it in a way. great job. keep it up. i hope to read more from you. and thank you for the comment

I gotta say the ending was a suprise...well for me it was...good job

Ur a very intresting poet. but i rly love it. maybe u can come check mine out. and tell u what i think. im gonna keep reading urs thoough. i love what ive read so far and i cant wait 2 read more.