Nice ,good meaning.

Ur poem was cute, i swear... u r religious?

Ya i am totally christain! lol <3

"I love you,
more then the air i breath,"

Excellent opening, it immediantly showed the depth of the feelings and the rest of the poem followed suit
A wonderful tribute!
5/5
*Gem*

A beautifully written and really touching poem! it was so simple yet so full of meaning and truth! i loved it! keep it up! xXx

Beautiful very meaningful 5/5 Steve