Comments : David

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well thank you so much. this is so good to read. i am not a better writer to you. you are such a talented writer. you always have been. and i am honoured to know that you think i am such a great person.

    we will always be friends. talk to me whenever you need. i will always talk back and be a true friend.

    5/5 always. David

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww that was a cute and easy to read poem. the flow and rhyme was nice. you did have a spelling error though: Heck even better then me. THAN, instead of then.

  • Cute poem. I liked the way you repeated, Hello David.

    Good Job 5/5

    :Sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    The repetition works really well in this poem, and shows how devoted you are to the subject. I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's full of meaning. Great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute poem... simple but in this case it works... adorable

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    I really like the way this flows, you can tell it comes right from the heart. Great write. You are talented.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Aw, this was really good.
    great job!

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Austin

    That was a sweet poem kaila ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Simple yet touching. I think its great to have friends and to show the how specail they are with the gift of words. great job very sweet.