Shoot dan no tme no read. Loving this poem by the way. I love your sad poems. THe only thing you might want to read over is the use of their and then the next line you use we. :)

*Darn hehe you can just deleate this comment just needed to point that word out. Too early for me to type.

Nice poem i liked it keep up the good work shanik

Nat, I am glad to see you back and writing. It seems like you haven't lost your touch at all, but you are short on words. I know when you start writing again, you will be at the top of your game, and you will come back kicking butt! I really like this poem, although it was short, it was very deep.

Exquizitly creative, keep it up. 5/5

Hey great job with this poem. wording was really good. very powerful xx

Hey, i luv this . Keep up the great work :D

This is a very powerful poem, though short i was totally captivated! great choice of words!!
xxx
~*kirsty*~

Great

Very nice poem I Like it alot :)

Two words. Great Poem.