I think this one is probably the best one that you have wrote in a while

Well shut my mouth and hand me a doughnut!!....u know that had me right from the get go...its like were playing a hand of poker except something so much more valuable is at stake:D
gr8 write
keep it up

can u please read rate and comment on some of my poems even the earlier ones....or any that catch ur fancy...cheers:D
will do the same for u:D