I am honoured to comment and vote on this poem first. well done.

5/5 david

That rhymed too much. i like the big words tho...i might check out somemore of urs later

Stupid reading my mind lol. This is how i felt today. Man great job. 5/5
-vino

WOWWWWWWWWWW WHAT A AWESOME POEM BLEW ME AWAY
i can't wait to read all urs I got just the right poem for you too. its my fav. on this site. IT's called 8:11 by
koriey its like this [poem check it out cy

Don't forget that poem 8:11 just put it in search poem and majic

I told you that 8:11 was good I GOT ONE THAT I SWEAR THIS GIRL went
into my brain and read my thoughts cause every word of this poem i swear
about me yet i never met this poet
the poem is called ALMOST by
gracie danielle awesome poem
cy if you like cracy ones check out my poem called I AM YOU DISEASE
ITS WEIRLD CY I GOT ANOTHER
COOL ONE BY JAMICA I FORGET THE TITLE I'LL GET BACK TO YOU

How well you tell of these feelings

Being by yourself
is pain itself.

I know these feelings so well
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

It's a real good poem... I loved it! Fantastic work!

Incredible poem! It flowed so well and it desrves a 5/5. A pleasure to read, thank you.

Your opening lines are very thoguhtful, and emotive. i think in general you rely to heavilly on rhyme but this is good, but it did seem very forced in places. Your title absolutely rocks. i love it and it is a good piece but yeah i think the rhyming was just a little too much for me.

Jem

That was amazing!! it definitly deserves 5/5... great! and thanks for the comment!

This poem was so sad.
i can relate to it very well.

You believe nothing really matters,
for your mind's with clatters.

It's life without a model
to adore the highest coddle.

No one should be alone,
for it's a world like stone.

Never allow loneliness to come in,
for it becomes a life of sin.

just love the way you have written this.
5/5
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Beautifully penned. Your flow and vocab was so delightful it was sometimes hard to remember this is a sad poem.

Omg the layout totally threw me lol. anyhow I loved your choice of words,

Solitary is a confinement
of unbalanced alignment.

fav lines :)