Like its style well done xxx

I like it...its simple and to the point. i love it

Great job -- once again
I loved it -- as always

Full of emotion.

Keep it up

take care

Fantastic poem!

There are times when I ask myself these questions all the time & it hurts to know the person wouldn't answer yes to any of the questions. The emotions portrayed were strong and the flow was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Full of feeling....still a bit short...but its enough...think u should edit "last time"
very good poem indeed

Itme misspelled time correct
woud misspelled would correct
liek misspelled like correct

small mistakes like these should be rectified before even posting Plot121

There are some tiny mistakes, such as mispelled words and such, make sure you check these before you submit.
Apart from that i liked the style and content. The flow was good and the imagery was okay.
keep writing to improve the talent you already have
love Tara-Kay
x

Awesome poem... i am adding to my favs.

</3 Jess </3

I gave you a 5 but i towards the ending i think you cut some off, you had amazing flow in the beginning, getting the reader warmed up but you didnt reach the climax. your poem DID make me feel like you were talking to me, which is a really really good thing, keep it up

All the what if's in the world never solve a delimma. However, I sit here and ask the same darn things over and over again... I have been for three years now and just cannot seem to find the answers.

--Sher