The cleaner

by Cassie Cain   Mar 30, 2007


He's alone in the world, all by himself
He doesn't seem to care if the world's unfair

He cleanse out, his job is so easy, cause he's good at it,
He does it so fast, he's a pro, hes been cleaning for quite a bit

The best known people hire him to clean
To the world on top, he's unseen

He's good at what he does so quick and rush less
So he points his gun so fast and accurate

Cleaning little by little, cleaning bit by bit
Till there's no more to clean only he knows when to quit

*******again another fictional story, enjoy!!************

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  • 16 years ago

    by icarus

    I definitely didn't see where this was going at first. I enjoyed the unexpected twist though, it's a meaningful poem.
    I would try working on lines 3 and 4 though.

    he cleanse out, his job is so easy, cause he's good at it,
    he does it so fast, he's a pro, hes been cleaning for quite a bit
    The rhyming seems a little forced and the sentences seem a little simplistic. try not to use word's such as 'cause', you don't sound as intelligent. Just my suggestions and opinions. I may be wrong.

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