I really liked this poem! It was very exciting to read and I have to be truthful. It made me cry and become deeply inspired! Thank-you for writing it. It just flowed and came together like a puzzle. Great job!

You did a great job.
Loved it. :]]

Keep it up.

I enjoyed this poem. the only thing wrong, the last line didnt rhyme with cam. <3

Woah
I loved this poem
My eyes are welling up with tears
I think this poem was amazing
You are such a wonderful writer
great work

Excellent poem and wording was great , the flow was also great , could feel the sadness in this poem , very well written and a pleasure to read, great job , your friend Tracy dean~5/5

This is really good (: