Comments : Moon, Season, or a Lifetime

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Wow summer! this is fantastic!!!! the first stanza gripped my heart. i think this might be my favorite of yours. i have been asking myself similar questions. i wrote a new one, "someone said say hello...". i was thinking about a tremendous friend of mine (bawling listening to david gray).man!i really like this. i love poems that pose questions. so good!

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    WOWWWWWW you think you know someone
    and then this WOWWWWWWWWWW""''
    WHAT A GREAT POEM"'' THE THIRD PART
    WAS

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    THE THIRD part was my favorite. i love it
    keep them coming. cy

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Hey summer im ok. new job taking all my
    time up . I guest thats for the best. u know
    what i mean. i loved this poem keep writting
    like this, have you check out jennifer new ones. any way got to go eat. You caqlled anything you want but don't called me late 4
    dinner lol cy

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Hey summer im ok. new job taking all my
    time up . I guest thats for the best. u know
    what i mean. i loved this poem keep writting
    like this, have you check out jennifer new ones. any way got to go eat. You caqlled anything you want but don't called me late 4
    dinner lol cy

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Miss you cy