Pure Gold

by ZAcKismSk8tRbOi   Mar 31, 2007


A heart full of love
As pure as gold
Held by a hand
Whose heart was sold

The gold longs for keenness,
Dedication and zeal
But all that hand longs for
Is the heart’s gold to steal

The hand reaches and grabs
Until it can grab no more
And all that is left of the heart
is malice, spite and loathing to the core

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This was the first poem I wrote EVER-so please don't laugh TOO hard when you read this...Comments Please!

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  • 16 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    Wow thats amazing for a first poem

    and so true in itself..

    it flows pretty well too

    great :]

    keep writing like this and you shall go far

  • 16 years ago

    by chiildhoodMEMOiiRS x

    AwEsOmE pOeM! [[VotEd 5]] ThXs FoR dA cOmMeNt, JsT rEtUrnInG dA fAvOuR ;)

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