Uncontrolled Hatred in an Unclear Mind

by The battleground in your heart   Mar 31, 2007


My hatred is unexplained,
but my twisted thoughts clearly bring it out,
My death will be the beggining of my happiness,
so will somebody just kill me now!

I've wasted my time trying to clear my mind,
when i was clealry insane,
Its not like anyone ever cared anyway,
so will someone just end my pain!

I hate you all for keeping me alive,
in this pointless thing called life,
So if you wont do me a simple favor,
then i guess I'll have to find a knife.

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  • 16 years ago

    by miranda

    I really relate to all of ur poems....i love reading them and this one was especially good.....i loved the last two lines.........it was like the anger and frustration were so clear and alive when i read it........perfect.....keep writing.....i enjoy reading them!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    Wow... how dark but I guess that's the point. =/ kudos!! ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    This is good poetry from the heart and soul.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    Woowwwww..so going on my favorates. great emotion. you write from your soul.

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Deeply Penned, each word was bursting with emotion.

    5/5

    Elaine

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