Eihlmahtj

by Jubail   Apr 1, 2007


The moon shines its beauty

A glow which blinds the eyes

Sentiments of a heart that's empty

Hiding the truth, Facing the lies

It is neither man nor woman

An entity far beyond my reach

Thy love of he which is buried in sand

All for nothing, wasted tears

Hope which drives me day by day

Petty sorrows, unmountable pain

Tis moment we had shall never fray

Twisted feelings, all in vain

Thy mind with a thousand question

Will it, what if, why me

Burden by the wings of passion

My wish, stay with me, EihlMahtj

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was absolutely delightful to read, Kabs. Having stated an androgynous being is exceptional. Also, this can be view as having both sexes...hmm. I envisioned this as a well-balanced, ethereal being, by the way...

    ...mystically deep, as always...

  • 17 years ago

    by Noir

    You know what...I got to say this poem really has something special in it, and if you tweeked the use of pronouns...Seeing as you said this entity is asexual...

    Other than that, you got a real poetic gem here....Be glad you made it...

  • 17 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Great use of words. Nicely done. 5/5 And thank you for reading my poem.

    Tina

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