Ten Tears Ago

by Rachel   Apr 1, 2007


Ten tears ago he loved me so
ten tears ago i did not know
of the troubles he causes tonight

Ten tears ago i was happy as could be
ten tears ago you were right here with me
holding me tight and it all felt right

Ten tears ago i was sitting in my room
happily thinking of he'd I'd be seeing you soon

But it all came to a halt
when you told me it was a lie
though you said it wasn't my fault
i still feel like I'm going to die

I needed your comfort but all you did
was tell me to stop loving you
so my feelings that night i hid
while wishing that your love had been true

And you left me crying
all alone that night
i was only trying
to stop our fight

So i thought to myself
what can i do
whats best for my health?
but all i could think of was you

But i know that won't work
so i throw out those thoughts
i know he's a jerk
he's put my heart in these knots

And it seems like so long ago
when i cried those ten tears
but being here solo
has helps me over-come those fears

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was an good poem but the ending had abit of snag on flow for me. I loved the structure and the emotions were well thought out but the ending was abit unsettling. Well any way good job I gave it a 4 Plot121.