Comments : Love and Holding Hands

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Good wording and rhyme...They make it alot easier to read..and a good topic
    Beatifully penned
    With love
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I dont normally like poems that rythmn as yours tend to do but yours tend to be an exception to that... you are able to express great ideas well without interupting the message you are trying to portray with your rhymning