Oh well done. this poem was stunning. in every way.

5/5 David

One thing I'll point out before I say anything else:
"you say there's nothing more too be said," - 'too' should be 'to'. :)

I liked this, however, I don't think it's your best. I dunno, everything just seemed a little too cliché for me.

It was still good to read, though. The rhyming was good and the flow nicely done. I just think it could have been better.

This was a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I did not pick the winners just because I liked them, but also on grammical errors and flow. Here are my notes.

Her full red lips. = Her full red lips,
flee. = flee,
watching her sit there, dead = watching her sit there, al ready dead (it didn't flow. Add some words.)
Frozen with dread = No flow. Add discription. Dread from what?
An angel poised for flight = No flow. Try: An angel poised for her very last flight

Over all it was really good. Some of it didn't flow though. Just fix it by adding or taking away words.

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I love the rhyme in the poem! Good choice of words! and again a great poem!

Very unique and interesting poem, topic is great. You wrote it greatly, rhythm of this piece is excellent and you described emotions superbly.
Well done, this one deserves 5/5