This poem gives me a clear image
Of what happened on your date
How much you enjoyed it.
It is very well written.

What a sweet lil date. You sound very young, but you made this poem seem so muhc sweeter than just going out on a date for a girl, and i liked it. thanks for comments on my poems, read more if you like, but some are quiet morbid, though i think you'd find interest in the love ones.

Wolf.

I liked your poem as well as your date ^_^

Your date sounded like so much fun, and i like the way that you grabbed my attention at the very beginning.... very well written

Awww...that's sweet. ^_^ kudos

Really cute poem.. loved it. I can imagine breifly how great your date has went..
good memories will be sewed to our minds.. never to be forgotten..
take care x

Very very very cute poem! im sitting here smiling to myself. loved it!!