Short and simple with a load of emotion.. nicely done
Very emotive.
5/5
*Gem*

Very diffrent. Deep emotion. Very sad. Great job!

Really short, but hey those are somtimes the best :)
actually It threw me in a sad mood..... but hey it was a 5 so keep it up!

Short n really full of emotions real pain...5/5

God bless u

Again the grammer was off in this, which made it difficult to read fluently, and understand completely.
Can I ask why "an" is capitalised on the third line ?
It was an emotional and saddening write though. Thanks for sharing.

Wow this is really good. short, but it said soo much. i defiantly enjoyed reading it. keep it up. 5/5

~Kristina

Wow! though this poem are short but seems very interesting and every words are means alot. it quite touch and great structure! 5/5

LOVED IT..EVEN THOUGH IT WAS SHRT IT JUST SHOWS US that our old heartaches wotever they may b are always with us no matter what..gr8 write
keep it up:D
bree