This was an interesting poem. I loved the ending i thought it was funny. However i must admit that most Haiku's are only one stanza and so this isn't really a traditional Haiku. Nevertheless it was enjoyable.

I don't understand this poem really I mean it kinda got me lost in the middle

This didnt fit all too great as a haiku. it needed a few words, but since it was in a specific format, it didnt aid the poem to its full potential.

Hmm... intresting idea for a haiku. I mean you wrote 5 and then kinda put them all togerther. Its different seeing a haiku in the life catagorie, their usually in nature. I like the kinda story that youve wrote in this poem.. i odnt really know what to say... there something missing... but its an intresting read. Keep writiting. xx