Yikes is that how you honestly feel yikes then change your plans

I really liked this poem. i thought the flow was great. Good read ~mel

I love poems like this, i think Free is such a beautiful word
Fab message with this poem
5/5
*gem*

Super awesome poem i love this one and once again thanks for the comment:D:D

keenan

The stops (where you began a new line, not sentence, line) were a little funky. I dunno, something about this poem, I just didn't like it very much. It didn't intrigue me. It wasn't explained as to why you are a sort of prisoner. It just wasn't thrilling to me. I don't know if I should rate it. I'd give it a low rating so I won't unless you request for me to.