Don't you know not to talk to strangers? haha..just kidding...a great sense of compassion and how society is in that poem...good job :)

The rhyming made he reading easy and smooth. however, it didn't fully flow.

Comment #5:
Holy freakin' crap! That was the most powerful poem I have read in forever! I mean the was just....WOW! There is no way I'm not adding that to my favorites. Heck! I'm adding YOU to my favorites! :D! I mean that almost made me cry and I am NOT a crier. That was just pure brilliance right there. LOVED it! Kudos to you!!! 1,000,000/5!!!!
~Midnight Sun