A Heinous Crime

by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me   Apr 3, 2007


You look around this bloody room
See all the stains
Hear all there crys

But only you know who killed all those innocent teens
Your mind is racing
For fear of discovery

Your mind plays tricks
You get a kick out of others pain

But you went to far
And now you are suffering

You lost everything you once had
All your friend gone in an instant

A stupid game that should not have turned out this way
now you are the one dieing

Groaning in pain
You know no one will believe this is just a game
No one will care about you silly pleas
Once they find out
You are sure to flee

So you lay on your bed holding a razor blade
You've done everything to be done
You think you've got it made

Before you have a chance to end it all
A knock on the door
A small frightened call

You slice your wrist, cry out in pain
The doors bursts open
It is all over now
No one can find you anymore

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  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Eh. Really cliche. A tip: stay away from cliche.

    Now, I liked the idea/topic, and the flow wasn't too bad, but it seemed as if you were telling a story normally, rather then poetry.

    But, not too bad.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    It was a tad confusing though
    Might wanna fix that

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