These are my fave kind of poems to read, so much feeling and so little words. very powerful. 5/5

I liked this, Tyburns aint that easy to write because you have to put the right words in. I find it pretty difficult but you did a really great job with this. Well done ~mel

I tried to do one of these. HAHA. I wish. :|
You did an excellent job though, sweetie.
Loved it!
Keep it up. :]
5/5

Beautifull dark chilling....FeEl LiKe GiViNg Up

Beautifull dark chilling....FeEl LiKe GiViNg Up

Comment #4

The last line was off a little bit on the syllable count but i know how hard this are.
I had to do a double tyburn for a challenge and man, are they difficult!!
lol
A good attempt though
5/5
*Gem*

I liked the feeling though it's so short..and i liked the formar..i will sometime try it
Good job
Take care
Laura

Very creative!
I've never read one of these
before. Pretty neat.
Keep up the great work!
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

I've never heard of this style of writing before so it was good to see a new style. I liked this poem great job!