Comments : I Am Blinded By My Lighting Way

  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    How can one say for others to take back when they say there are bad when that one self says they are bad themself... Your amazing in your words... the flow just fits... Every word from the heart. Like your soul in coming out in ink. Like your words tell the world what you feel. Never holding back what inside. Letting others know what your heart says not just your mind. The beauty of art, and words... The true beauty is not of looks but of what's on the inside. The mouth of a true beauty... know that whats on the outside could never stand up to what the inside can do.

    I sure hope you find the true beauty within.
    Good luck in our writing, I love reading ever word, your quite amazing!

    Much love and the best of wishes!
    @!Jezzika!@

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I have to say I think this is one of the best I`ve read in a while,It read so sincere and from the heart , absolutely beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Last poem to vote and comment. 5/5 and excellent job. I hope to see more of your work soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Absoultly amazing. Straight from the heart, comes such strong emtion. Your word choice is brillent, and the flow is perfect. Well done. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this was something else. amazing. you are such a talanted writer. it flowed so nicely. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Heaven? did i get it right. I hope so lol i felt very relaxed reading this poem considering the environment im in thats good lol. I felt like i was there which is what a poem is supposed to do a good read

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I wondered what would be the content of this piece just by looking at the caption and It really induced me to read this one. very imaginative and creative. 5/5 for sure