Now that is a poem to be proud of. the imagery was amazing. I am breathless. I absoultly loved it. 5/5

Another fantastic piece of writing. Far better than those I have read so far.. I loved the imagery and the rhymes were perfect, I felt the flow was lost a little in the third stanza.. However, I know that sometimes people don't read your poetry correctly and so the flow is lost on them.. Really amazing, I could think of no improvements.

Sole. x

Five branches die
each lifeless as the last
at first the cool weather held
five times I die, future now past

Imagery was very good. I could feel and sense all of the emotion behind the words of this poem. Great write

Take Care.

This was so heartbreaking, yet such a pleasure to read.
I thought the flow was good throughout, the imagery used was beautifully done and the emotion screams through the words.
I noticed that there seemed to be quite a few fillers in certain places, which at the odd time did throw the flow off just a little.
Apart from that however, I think you did a wonderful job with this.

A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

Again, qite well written but I'm afraid I do not understand the symbolism of the five branches and what they represent. Not overly simplistic or deminutive of the reader.

A brilliet pice of work .... congraz 5/5

*zvetty*