Comments : A poem he'd never get to read

  • 12 years ago

    by The Dee

    Amazing poem! my inspiration xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Krista

    "So now I am stuck in this merry-go-round called love" Beuatiful. I loved that line. 5/5.
    Please vote/rate/comment on my poetry too!!! Thanks!

  • 12 years ago

    by Belinda marie

    Hey this poem is the best!

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany

    This describes almost to a key what I'm going through now. It's amazing. There's a beautiful flow to it, and you can see it all unfolding and feel every feeling. Absolutely astounding.
    Love it! <3
    And you! =)

  • 12 years ago

    by nettie

    Wow...i have a crush too...n its so hard talkin to dem cuz u go blank evertime dey come round..keep up da good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Great poem 5/5 x

  • 12 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    Wow, thatt was really really good!!! i know exactly how that feeling is. great job!!! :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by LiNa

    I'm in lovw with this poem i cannot tell you how great it is... it makes me feel good . i hope you get this guy ....i feel the same way with sumone and it's like they hold ur heart in there hands but they dont even know it.haha but i think you should give him this poem i really do, it will show him how much you really care the worst he could do is laugh.

  • 12 years ago

    by desperately needing you

    OMG this is totally me
    i love the poem

  • 12 years ago

    by halie

    Wow amazing poem
    you did a great job on it
    i can relate and im sure almost everyone else can too,
    just wow lol
    great poem,
    keep writing


  • 11 years ago

    by Cara

    I really liked the ideas of this one and the emotion in it.
    although, i did think that it lacked a few poetic devices, but please dont take that as, i didnt like the poem, because i did.
    you had amazing stand out lines in it. you just need to link them with maybe some rhyming, or if that isnt your style, a bit more of imagery or metaphors or even just adjust the syllables a bit.
    but overall, great poem.