This describes almost to a key what I'm going through now. It's amazing. There's a beautiful flow to it, and you can see it all unfolding and feel every feeling. Absolutely astounding.
Love it! <3
And you! =)
I'm in lovw with this poem i cannot tell you how great it is... it makes me feel good . i hope you get this guy ....i feel the same way with sumone and it's like they hold ur heart in there hands but they dont even know it.haha but i think you should give him this poem i really do, it will show him how much you really care the worst he could do is laugh.
I really liked the ideas of this one and the emotion in it.
although, i did think that it lacked a few poetic devices, but please dont take that as, i didnt like the poem, because i did.
you had amazing stand out lines in it. you just need to link them with maybe some rhyming, or if that isnt your style, a bit more of imagery or metaphors or even just adjust the syllables a bit.
but overall, great poem.