Dang this is a real good and cute and of coarse romantic poem. i really like it and hope you + your boyfriend last 4ever. oh yah im the first 1 to comment this! =]

Awe! that is sooo sweet! yay. i think that he is about to ask u out again! woohoo!!!! lol

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This is really good. It reminded me of my ex, none the less it was great!!

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Omg this is sooo cute i love the way you write 5/5 and thanx for the comment. _*~Kelsey

This was so great very well written i hope you and your bf stay together forever how cute =).. thanks for the comments

Sweet poem sara...

Omg... i just wrote like a ten page poem on here ok not that long but it was long and when i went to go sumbit it it said you have to be logged in to do that. gerrr im sooo mad comment back. -Kels

Hey can you comment on my new poem my angel? thanks...

Very beautiful! 5/5

Wow... wonderfully written.. I absoultely love it!! It's so emotional, and it brings back all of those memories of Mike... *smiles sadly* they are wonderful memories.. and it hurts that we can never be like that again. I'm sorry your b/f broke up with you, I know how hard that is, but I'm glad you are still friends, as are Mike and I, sort of, lol, more like getting there!! ^_^ But anyway, you have awesome talent, keep up the awsome work and you might make it to my favs list!! lol 5/5, even though it deserves more. And thank you for the comment!!

.:Danielle:.

Awwwww!!!!!! That's like soooooo true....I thought I was the only one that felt like that!

I luv this feeling!!! i hope this is how it always is for u xoxo

Nice.........

This poem flowed so well, after I read the first stanza I was hooked and absolutely had to read on. I'd have to disagree about the sweetest kiss though lol cuz thats me GG23 5/5 Amazing as always

Awwwwwwwwwww thats so sweet i love it so much awww lol its so niceeeeeee
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This reminds me of my magical kisses poem just deeper

Aww thats really a sweet poem im sure he loved it!!!! : ) 5/5

Awwwww.
shane!!!!!!!
i love that guy.
he's soooo sweet!
you're sooooooo lucky!

Very nice read. i liked it alot. my fav stanza was

My heart is beating quick
My legs are sinking to the floor
My stomach's feeling sick
My lips are touching yours

awesome wording..

some places in ur poem i think could be reworded. cause sum rhymed and sum didnt. so it made it seem a bit forced. i rated this a 4. but very good job. keep itup