I found this poem really interesting. I loved the flow and it seemed really dark and sad to me. Great emotional flow. Well done ~mel

Great poem good flow

I soooo loved this poem...
if it weren't for the title, i would only had figured it out in the end... this is just soo good...(i'm running out of adjectivs...xD)
really, this was an awesome write
keep going
*isabel*