Comments : Can You be More Then That?

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Heya, Thanks for commention on one of my poems much appreciated :) I really loved this poem its sweet and cute the only suggestion i make is that you capatilize each letter of each line it makes the format and structure look a lil neater :) other then that i really did enjoy reading this poem well done on a great effort ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the questionning tone in this poem. And it's a concept that i know a lot of people will relate to cos i'm sure everyone has asked at least ONE of those questions before.
    I know i have
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Wow, this is currently my favourite poem ever! It completely applies to something that happened/is still happening. This is amazing. :)!